Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts
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Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Storytelling Week 9: The Poor Good Man

There was once a very poor family. The head of the family was Fabio, and he was not sure where he was going to get the money to feed his family. For a couple of days Fabio sat and pondered on ideas and ways he was going to be able to get the money, but nothing seemed to make sense. During this time nobody was making any money because jobs were scarce, so working for the money was not going to happen. Almost everyone in the village was out of a job and starving. Fabio needed to think of something and he needed to do it fast!


Fabio liked to think of himself as an honest hard-working man who always had his family fed even if it meant he himself was not able to eat. The decision Fabio came to was not an easy one, but it was one he believed to be necessary. Fabio was going to travel to one of the nicest villages he knew of and become friends with the people so he could take their food. He was not going to tell him he was taking their food, but instead he would just leave a note letting them know one day he hoped to repay them. Desperate is the only word that could describe Fabio at the time.


It was a cold winter day when Fabio set out on his journey to the village where he was going to find his family’s food. He only informed his wife he would be leaving to work a job, because that is all she needed to know.


When he arrived at the village he made friends easily at the local gathering spot. Soon after arriving a man named Louis asked Fabio to join him for dinner. Louis was a hard-working man just like Fabio. Since Fabio had nowhere to stay that night, Louis offered his house and a free meal. Fabio could not believe how easy it was going to be to get the food.


That night Fabio had a wonderful dinner with Louis and his wife and children. Not sure how he was going to get out with the food without getting caught, Fabio decided to stay the night and make a plan. He was awake all night planning the perfect escape with the food.


The next day came and Louis told Fabio he could stay as long as he liked, but he was going to be going to work and his wife was walking the children to school. That was the perfect time for Fabio to implement his plan. He got all the food he believed he would need and wrote a note to Louis thanking him. Louis tried explaining why he did what he did, but it would not come out right, so he just went on his way hoping everything would be okay.


Fabio got all the way to the edge of town when he came into contact with the sheriff of the town and Louis. He just thought he had gotten away. Earlier the day before Fabio had told a gentleman about his plan, and it just so happens that gentleman works with Louis and told him everything.


Louis was so disappointed in Fabio because he thought he was a standup guy like himself, but Fabio proved him wrong. If Fabio would have just asked Louis for some food he would have happily of given it to him. Instead Fabio is now sitting in jail in a village nowhere near home. Which mean he has no way to feed his wife and children, or even let them know of what has happened to him.


Author's Note:

When writing this story I had the story The Theft of Fire in my head. In that story the Karoks were cold and did not have a way to warm themselves up. The Coyote offered to steal some fire from the Hags for them. All the animals got in a line so the Coyote could hand them the fire and they could pass it down the line. The Hags let the Coyote in and he scoped the place out and made a plan with the Indian for the next night. The Coyote managed to make it out of the tepee with the fire and handed it to the Lion, and it made it all the way to the Frog who put it on the driftwood. They got to keep the fire. In my story Fabio is without work and unable to feed himself and his family. He goes to steal food from a new friend and is caught. So, instead of getting away with the food like the animals got away with the fire Fabio was caught. I wanted him to get caught because a lot of the time if, you just ask someone for something they will give it to you. Especially if they believe you are an honest person, and Louis did believe Fabio was an honest person. Just because you need something does not mean you can just steal it. I wanted to make my story a lesson instead of the bad guy getting away with it like they usually do in these stories. I did use people instead of animals also because I have a hard time believing some of these animals all worked together like that since I never even see them together in the real world. I am not sure why but I even though I know these stories are not real it is hard for me to make fake stories like that.

Bibliography:
Picture: Man behind bars
Source: The Inquirer

"The Theft of Fire" by Katharine Berry Judson, from Southwestern and California Legends. Website:UnTextbook



Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Reading Diary A: Southwestern and California Legends

Southwestern and California Legends

Three Coyote Creation Stories: 

  • The coyote was always going the good things 
  • And the Eagle came along and helped finish it up
  • I like the super short stories
Creation of The World:
  • How did these random people just appear
  • I like how it showed how things were created
  • Its interesting how they described all the things and how they came about
The Great Fire / The Origin of Light:
  • Magpies is a weird word
  • Sticks turning into men and women is a weird concept
  • I can't imagine there not being any light 
  • I like how they distinguished why the sun is brighter than the moon
Old Man Above and The Grizzlies:
  • People always do exactly as they are told to do in these stories except the little daughter in this story
  • I like the rebel
  • Old man had a lot of power it seems
The Creation of Man-kind and the Flood:
  • I like the idea of magic crystals it reminds me of a magic ball
  • The names in the story are so boring, and not really names at all just types of people
  • The first person to appear after the flood was named the ruler
The Great Flood:
  • I picture the stars coming out of the bag being pretty
  • He opened the bag even though he wasn't supposed to 
  • Got in trouble but still managed to keep some of the stars
The Fable of the Animals:
  • Fishes in the big water made me laugh instead of saying ocean
  • Never thought of how animals knew what to eat 
  • All the animals laughed but man still took pity on the coyote
The Course of the Sun:
  • I can't even pronounce the spiders name, but I like how it has stayed the same through out these stories
  • How is the sun the spiders son
  • I like how it talks about eating for when the sun stops
The Theft of Fire:
  • Karoks?
  • How do you steal fire?
  • I can just picture all these animals running as fast as the can with fire on the end of a stick hanging out of their mouth
Coyote and the Tortillas / Coyote and the Mesquite Beans:
  • Why would someone put a basket of tortillas on their head? To carry it easier maybe?
  • The women was pretty clever to be standing on a stump
  • Shouldn't do what you are told not to do is the moral of that last story